The tale of two planets

Prolouge

John Largo watched the morning

mist float through the towers of the massive Hargos city. It was only 5 am and the sun just

came up sending the sky into blazing colors. Even at this early time small ships and

transports flew beteen the buildings. Last night he was watching the news as negotiations

between planets Gargos and Yamara broke down. It was only a matter of time till the missles

started falling from the sky onto the city he loved.
So he walked down to his

personal shuttle and went off towards the military recruiters.
when he walked

into the large office building a man at the fron desk said "ah i gather you are mister

Largo" He then went into a large transport which took him through the streets of the city.

"'bso you are training to be a fighter flyer i heard they get all the women." he then

laughed then as he looked out the window of the transport the sky was lighting up.

The transport driver laughed "looks like the war starts earlyer than expected."

In the space above the planet of Yamara no one was safe. Hundeds of fighters swooped

down on the large station above the planet. The Gargosian piolet Zorak flew his "staph"

fighter out of the hanger. Over the com he heard his flight leader "Zorak you and Harra take

out the defence platform near the shipyard." He and his friend Harra courused "aye." Before

he came into his run he took aim on a refuge barge heading away from the planet to the jump

point. He heard the despreat pleas from them but paid no mind. He put the huge barge into

his targeting retical and fired his main phase cannon. The hyperfast energy bolts tore

through the hull of the barge destroying it from the inside.
Before he turned his

attention to the small defence platform he looked at the atmosphere and bodies flying out of

the holes in the ship.
He then flew towards the platform dodging the disrupters of the

platform and the fighers defending it. AFter he dodged the opening attack he fired his ion

cannons most all of them hit the shields of the platform. when the scanners said the shields

where down he activated his swarm torpedos and fired. the station exploed in a ball of

fire.
Before he returened to his carrier he destroyed a refuge ship and a

comuication satilite. The slaughter was a day in the life of a gargosian warrior.

Chapta 1

It had been 2 years since that dreadfull day over ten thousend died in the

first hour. But the thing that saved the planet was the experimental planetary shield. It

kept the gargosian forces from landing on the planet or bombing it.from bombing it from

above. John Largo now fresh out of the acadamy walked towards the hanger housing his bomber.

when he arrived in it it was crowed by techs running to and frow doing what ever they needed

to do. "make sure my ship is set for the mission jones" he hollard towards the head tech.

the old man nodded. as John walked into the briefing room on the other side of the base he

wondered what kind of mission he was going on. he had only gone on a couple of missions

mostly bominb runs on the gargoian capitol ships or escorting friendly ships in orbit.

When he walked into the briefing room the flight leader thomas hansen stood up. "hope

i dident bother u ur majesty but we have a mission to do." John sat down at a table and

waited for him to start.
"now that we have made sure the surface of the planet is

safe we can focus on the enemeys in oribt." he paused and looked around at the various

piolets around the room. "now the gargosians have a station set up in orbit."
He

hit a button and the room darkend and a hologram of a sphear orbiting a gigantic shpear. the

Huge one was colord green and the other orange. the comander continued. "now that it is

finished we now know what it is. the brass think it is a station with which they will use to

launch further attacks on us. so our job is to attack it. the heavy battle cruisers will

move into an orbit around it and take down the shields while our fighter piolets cover them

when the shields are down the bomber piolets will assist the fleet in desroying the station.

get into ur groups are prepair to launch"

After the meeting the war

continued

to be continued.......

yes of course

i am planing to publish a book

sometime

but no too soon

and i will need a editor

hehehehehehehehe

more about the alien later

ok i give u permission to edit my

stories

if u can just use the edit button

deliverence u get to continue my saga please enjoy

it and make me proud

hey where is that story???

hehehee

i havent lost my wit

who wants to continue my story?

i

am taking offers

and will pick from the avalibal people

op how bout u do it?

i read the stuff u put on and ur

good.

the reason i dont want to write it is i am writing one i want to

publish

all i will say is a computer with weapon specs falling into the hands of the

germans in ww2

what ur book

about op?

cool

when u finish it post it on here dont worry i will not steal it:)