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Atm im creating a story for a game that's going to Rock them all 
atm im creating the history for the game so i can then build the main story more accurate, i already have a plan of what's going in it and it's main story is so big its going to take alot of pages, i think over a 100 pages pretty much a big book, lol typing im pretty bad at but who cares its something i want to do, Now so what this game about? well its it been inspired by alot of stuff and it will have FPS rollplay world freedom like landing on a planet manually as you go though the clouds the planet and will shrink to a more maintainable size but give enough freedom like morrwind and space like X3 pretty much the ultimate freedom in a game there's alot more than what i can think of right now but i cant tell some people the main story cuz some people just want to steal it and clame it theirs but i can post the work i have done to give an idea of what its about but this is the games history not the main story
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Goliyths
The story of how the goliyths came to be originally started the first war between the aldorens (from the so-called abandoned earth) and the sythins (humanoids thought to have evolved by a billon years). So there story goes like this. When the aldorens first started expanding into space in search of resources for the technology advancement and for their population growth, they sent a couple of scout ships with jump capability to explore the closest habitable star system to confirm the survivability and life sustenance on the ice planet IU-41 (one of the codenames given to the millions of planets discovered by orbital telescope).
So the survivability seemed low because of the extremely low temp (-27) but the oxygen level was high and there was no abnormal gas level, so the air was breathable and the scans pick tup some vegetation and small life forms, in saying so that there is a possible food source and the planet could sustain life. In response the aldorens immediately started production and research into mining and transport ships for the exploration of newly found planet. But as the months went by, 2 mining ships 4 transport ships followed by 4 missile frigates were born.
After the final preparations and testings the fleet was ready to go but one thing was missing, the fleet didnt have a name, after a while one of the fleet captains thought of one, he said well these transport ships are huge and our defence is a strong one what about transport fleet goliytha named after a giant, sounds quite suitable he said, the rest of the fleet agreed on it. And so the transport and mining fleet was ready to launch. After verification from the ODA (orbital defence agency) they launched from the orbital construction docks and prepared to jump,
after they initiated their jump phase coordinates the fleet entered hyperspace (a rapid increase in speed and that is faster than light) after a few days they exited hyperspace close to there designated coordinates. The fleet started to head towards IU-41 to see a massive metallic looking space ship all of a sudden they were getting hailed on their communications,
the coms officer said. WHAT THE HELL!!!! . Frigate captain said. WHAT THE F**K who the F**K is that!!! . Coms. IT, S HAILING US ON THE COMS!!! CAPTAIN. Captain. Can you make it out!?!?. Coms. Something. somethingleviathan I CANT MAKE IT OUT!!! THEYRE SPEAKING some type of different language. Captain. OF COURCE YOU IDIOT!! THEIR ALIENS!!! . Captain. Now pull all ships into defence formation! Radar operator. THEYRE SOME TYPE OF ENERGY SPIKE COMING FROM THAT SHIP SIR!!! . Crew 1. LOOK AT THAT!!! . Crew 2. HOLY S**T IS FIRING AT US!!! .Captain. CREW PREPARE FOR BATTLE.
As the sythin battle cruiser started to engage the aldoren fleet the great battle over IU-41 began. The aldoren missile frigates released four fighter wings of three. Upon the sythins seeing this they released an armada of there own. The battle raged on for over half an hour, the aldoren fighter wings managed to even the odds but not by enough, as the sythin battle-cruiser kept on firing, one shot one kill, they obliterated the entire aldoren fleet making them fall planet side, but before they destroyed the final missile frigate, they managed to launch a gloriest cloud of missiles (30-40) that filled the sky, the sythin battle-cruiser AA defence could not stop it in time, the missiles swept though there defence like a hot knife though butter and destroyed the ships gravity drive and its main axillary thrusters making it plummet into the planet.
In one day, both aldoren and the sythin fell to the planet, hours after they both crashed they started to setup camp and some defence outpost to guard their parameter as they both dont know what could be lurking out there. So the next day, each side both started to send distress signals in hope that they could be saved and return home. As the months go by they both declare independents as it seemed they were both abandoned by there own governments, as the aldorens gather supplies the sythins prepare their defence, both not familiar with this climate they both start to explore.
Months later, Scout teams from both sides encounter each other. Each side thinking that there the only one on the planet was soon gone with the sight of each other, they shot at each other, though grenades at each other, at this point the aldorens smartly retreated while the sythins continued to attack where they thought they were. Minutes later the sythins stop firing and decide to advance slowly and when they got there, they realised they were tricked giving the aldorens a head start in warning there home base.
So they smartly decided to split up in to 2 groups of 2, one to track the aldoren footprints and the other to warn their base. Half an hour later the sythins caught up with the aldoren scout squad, while secretly following them they got a glimpse of the aldorens base before they where spotted, so in doing so they fled as fast as they could and managed to lose there new pursuers and get home safely. Now the sythins realise that if the aldorens attacked they could possibly overtake their base forcing them to retreat into the snow or worse. So they now stop focusing on defence, as it is a good idea but what good is defence if there is no one there to use it.
So they are now trying to train and match there army then get there troops dug in. and now that the aldorens know that there not alone they decide to prepare for an attack so they decide to bolster there defence. A couple of months later the aldorens decide to attack first in retaliation of there long gone fleet. They decide to do a pincer mauver with a diversion, so the first diversionary force head straight into the front of there base where there defence is strong, then encourage them to charge thinking that they over powered them but lure them out of there defences range where the first attack force will charge and try and silence the enemy force while when that has happened a second diversionary force will attack the right side of the base and hold on for as long as possible,
the second attack force will now attack from the left and cause as much damage as possible, the first attack force will then charge with the first diversionary force to the enemies front line and commence there main attack, now the second diversionary force will hook up with first attack force and cause as much havoc as possible. When the damage is done and cant hold on much longer, they will pull back to base and rest and heal. (He he smart plan, But no plan can work like pen in paper hehe) now back to the sythin base.
As their months went by they managed to straiten and align their crashed behemoth and to get more functionality of what is still working. With what they had, they managed to get their main gun sort of online. (Mwhahaha death star incarnate) and their cloning facilitys to fortify their army. Sythin general says. Hahaha, I like to se them get by now. Sythin soldier 1 says. BOOM, pickem off one by one when they get close. Solder 2 says. 100% defence increase hehe. And as their weeks went by they cloned and trained 400 troops for their defence (one person mind coped downloaded strait into their new hosts with a slight genetic change to distinguish one another, cuts down training to one week. Army on demand.)
One more week went by with the sythins, anticipating an attack and sometime in the afternoon over the ravine a large group of solders and built from scratch vehicles came charging strait at the base as the sythins predicted, so they open started to fire with there main defensive line full of lusteric turrets (a laser based weapon that can slightly curve and turn to hit its target) and dug in personal, forcing the aldorans to retreat. With the sythins full of excitement, they charge out of the trenches chasing the enemy in hoping to crush them. As the aldoreans retreat, another task force attacks from the right flank at the same time the retreating forces turn around and attack the sythin force over whelming them, the sythins tried to fall back, it was hopeless they had them cut off.
The sythins were slaughtered, only a couple survived and managed to get back alive. Defence Capt. Wheres your platoon solder!? . Sythin survivor 1. They where annihilated ser!. Survivor 2. We were ambushed on the right flank and they surrounded us ser. D Capt. .DAMIT, it was a diversion!. Sythin Scout. Ser there attacking the right flank!!. D Capt. Ok tell them to hold on a bit longer, well send some of the troops from the from the left defence flank, you two, go tell the officer in charge of the left defence flank to send some support to the right flank!! GO!! If they brake though were done for!!!.
As the two survivors flee to the left defence flank, mortar shells and bullets started flying by their heads as a large aldoren attack force commences their attack on the main line. Survivor 1. My god were going to die!! . Survivor 2. Get a hold of your self! Were going to make it, we just need to hold out a bit longer! Ok!. Survivor 1 k .so they ran though near impossible odds as the rain of death was above them, seeing their comrades die as the aldorens slowly advance. Survivor 2. Youyou barsted he was only a kid! Yell pay with your lives for what youve done!, come get some!! . Survivor 1. Ser! We need to go now!. Survivor 2 .youyou barsteds die die die! Ahhhhh!! . Survivor 2. Ser!! Shooting at them aint going to bring them back! Whats done is done! All is we can do is move on and not let there deaths be in vain!. Survivor 2. But! . Survivor 1. Come on! We need to get reinforcements from the left flank; theyre counting on us!. Survivor 2. No! Im staying. If they get through here wed be screwed anyway!. Ill try to help hold them off till they get the main gun online, go!. Survivor 1. Ok.. Just dont die on me ok... . Survivor 2. Hehe youd should be saying that to the enemy hehe I wont I promise, go!!.
And so he continued his mission though the thick of fire as sythin squads advance down the slope into the trenches to hold of the enemy, so as he ran to the left flank taking cover behind bits of debris that fell off their ship during their crash landing. A bit further on, he makes it to the main bunker on the left flank. Left flank officer. Damit they advanced more then I predicted have you got the coordinates on the enemy position?. Survivor 1. Ser I need to talk to you. Officer . No im busy, whats the status on the main line? Survivor 1. Ser!! . Officer. Can some one get him out of here!. Survivor 1. Were being overrun!!. Officer. Stop! , Overrun?. Survivor 1. It was a simultaneous attack!!, they lured out our squad past our defensive line then another squad ambushed us and cut us of... Only two of us survived, luckily we got back to the main line though we met up with the defence generalbut at the same time they attack both the front and the right side of our base and their starting to overtake the right flank!! ,
The defence general is requesting help and some reinforcements to the right flank. Officer. Shitbut somethings missing. hmmm k well start sending some reinforcements, well send someone to go get some more troops from the rear line to reinforce this area while some of our own start to make a parameter around the right flank. Hey you! Go assemble a third of our solders and send them to the right flank! . Solder 1. Im on it!. And you go pickup some reserves from the rear line! . Solder 2. You can count on me!
. Solder 3. Ser. Officer. What now! . Solder 3. Youd better look over hear . Officer. Omygod!, hey! Do you know how to work that turret? . Survivor 1. I think so . Officer. Than go!!. And so the aldorens commence their attack on the right flank. Officer. Hear me; those barsteds think that they can just walk all over us! Lets makeem think again! Kill them all! The sythin solders hiding in the foxholes and trenches pop up and start firing along with the turrets on the slope slaughtering the aldorens advance. Half an hour later.
Aldoren Capt. Damittheir defence is to strong, all forces pull back, retreat retreat!. Sythin solder 4. Keep firing keep firing!. Solder 5. Theyre retreating!. Officer. Hehe theyll be back. Solder 3. Ya sure?. officer. Theyll be joining the main force soon send a platoon to follow them, dont attack till they join the main assault force ok!. Solder 3. Youre sending me?. Officer. Yes you and that guy on that turret, go assemble the men then go, we cant afford to lose them. Solder 3. Ill go assemble the men then. So they go off following the task force in waiting for them to link up with the main assault force.
Survivor 1. Man, I could not think my day could get any worse. Solder 3. You said it. Scout. Ser theyre beginning to link up with the main force. Survivor 1. Ready the forces, Iv got a plan. Solder 3. So whats the plan?. Survivor 1. Sniping! A few of us will clime this ridge to get into position while some others continue to cercal around to the right flank giving us full cover fire to the main line and part of the left and right flank. Solder 3. Sounds good to me, so ho leads ho?. Survivor 1. You lead this squad while I take this one and cercal around to the right flank.
Solder 3. K. Survivor 1. Ill meet you on the other side. Solder 3. Haha very funny. 10 minutes later after tramping through snow and sneaking past enemy reinforcements, both teams managed to get into position. Solder 3. Sniper team 1, in position. Survivor 1. Sniper team 2, in position, commence firing on my mark, mark. As the sniper teams continued to fire on the aldoren advance they amazingly court them off guard giving the sythins their first major advantage in this battle, Solder 3. Ha, I think we gotem by the balls. Survivor 1. Ha! I think so to! Look! The main gun is about to fire! Take cover!.
Solder 3. Taking cover! Zhhhh! Boom!! As the sythins main gun hits the middle of the aldorens main assault force disintegrating all who were in that beam. Aldoren Capt. Ohno..! Its charging again! Ahhh? Run! Fallback fallback! Zhhhh! Boom!. Survivor 1. It sounds like their running hehe. Sniper group 2. Yep theyre definitely running. I hope our main gun dosint hit us?. Survivor 1 stay here, im going to check things out, hold on, yeah?. Solder 3. Are you seeing this?. Survivor 1. Seeing what?. Solder 3. Take a look at the battlefield. Survivor 1. Be there in 20secs. Solder 3. Can you see?.
Survivor 1. Wow thats a big hole?. Solder3. You think we won?. Survivor 1. No we may have won this battle but I fear there something more to come. After the remaining aldorens fell back the sythins started to rebuild their new home. Survivor 1. Hey youre alive!. Survivor 2. Yep they tried but I wouldnt let them have it. Solder 3. Whos this? Survivor 1. Hes the other survivor of the first ambush. Solder 3. Ahhh. Survivor 1. So... How did you do it?. Suvivor2. Well 20 minutes after you left things were looking bleak but at that moment a squad of heavy weapons specialist came over and mounted a couple of heavy lasers,
we managed to hold on long enough for the main gun to be fully charged, but man look at that hole it punched in the ground! Its got to be about hundred meters wide!. Solder 3. Its pretty big, your shoure the main gun was supposed to make such a big hole?. Survivor 2. No I think the engineers overcharged it accidentally. Survivor 1. Whatever the reason, we now have a big gapping hole between them and us, so it fine by me. Survivor 2. I hear their awarding solders that new armour who performed heroically today, their being called to the hanger.
Solder 3. Should we go? Survivor 1. Someones coming. Scout. What are your names? Solder 3. Private Surjov revanoun. Survivor 2. Revuan nuan. Scout. What rank? Survivor 2. Private. Scout. And you? Survivor 1. Alka vash, im private to. Scout. Great, your all here, iv hear great things from what you three did, congratulations you three get the V2 tactical battle suit with the new jump jet attachment and combined blade arm and plus some new weapons, and you get a promotion!. Surjov. New weapons, blade arm Revuon. No man jump jets man! Alka. Why do we get this battle suit? Scout.
Youve proven that your worthy enough to handle such an advance battle suit and have the skill to use it, its hard to find such people in this army who has that kind of skill, thats what iv always known. Alka. guess so Scout. Their waiting, wed better go. Alka. So, shouldnt you get that reward to? I saw you running all over the battle field through the thick of fire and strait though the enemy itself? As in saying that, thats pretty amazing in itself. Scout. Thanks, and yes! Im getting that suit as well and I think two others are getting it too.
Surjov. Thats great, youve definitely deserve it, when I was sniping, I saw you run strait though the battle field though the enemy to the other flank to deliver your messages! Man I even dont have the guts to do that! Scout. Thanks man, my names Falin by the way. Revuon. I still cant believe that our ship punched a never ending hole in the ground. Alka. Nothing goes on forever, Revuon. What about space? Alka. Except that. Surjov. Dont you guys wonder why we got are asses kicked today by some old ballistic weaponry? That just seems impossible to me.
Falin. I have to agree, their weapons were dam fierce. Alka. Hell yea, those weapons scared the crap out of me, Revuon. Looking back, there was a time when we used such weapons, at that time their was a war, a war for power to take control of the very first organised sythin government, the war raged over 200 years before a diplomatic solution would put an end to it I think. Alka. The point is? Revuon. Didnt you learn your history? What I was getting at is that was the most bloodiest war since the infinite war and to remind that we did use such weapons,
Surjov. But that doesnt answer the point? Why are they so effective now if there so old? Even when we were in that battle above this planet, there homing things managed to pass though our shield without stopping! Alka. Never thought of that Revuon. Confusing but it makes sense I think, the homing things are acutely called missiles, the reason why they penetrated our shield is because there ballistic, our own tech is focused on energy based weapons armour and shields the fact that ballistic weaponry can rip though our own tech is no surprise to me cuz that tech to us became obsolete a long time ago to the point that we forgot about it, and now that where facing an enemy that still in that stage, are armour is shit to it, but there on the same terms like us, they havent seen our type of weaponry before and thus giving us an even advantage.
Surjov. Makes sense Falin. Wow, I always thought history was boring, but that proved me wrong. Alka. Where here. Surjov. Theres a lot of people Revuon. Look at that Armour those two are wearing! Falin. It cant be! Revuon. (Looks at him with a puzzled face)???? Falin. Thats painted in Special Forces colour! Revuon. You think were being promoted to SSF? (Sythin Special forces) Falin. Why else would they give us SSF painted armour and a promotion? Alka. Well soon find out. D Capt. Great your hear, go stand by the stage and wait to be called up to get your reward.
Surjov. Is this about the SSF? D Capt. Youll find out. Sythin general. (Part of the end speech) today was a sad day, we lost many of our people friends, but it was a good day as wed showed the enemy that we would not put up with them and were ready to fight back! With superior skills and tactics well push them of this rock for good! With the heroic might of our empire and our people, I think we can start again, in four months were going to lay a counter attack on their base and were going to punch them hard and make sure that they dont forget the name sythin ever again! Today we wouldnt have made it without a very special six people, these people changed the tide of the battle by themselves to save our people, to people held the right defence line by themselves for 30 minuets, another one ran though the hart of the enemy multiple times to deliver the critical messages needed to change the tide of the battle, without him we may have lost this battle long before the battle started, one other held a 60 meter wide gap in the middle of the main line for 20 minuets! D Capt. You four go on stage!
Alka. What about us? D Capt. Wait. Sythin general. These four managed to hold the most critical parts of our defence without help, without them we would not be hear right now but there are still two solders left, why did I leave them till last? Well you might have not have seen them, but they played a major role in the fight one was involved in the first encounter where there whole squad got annihilated and only two managed to return, one is already up hear but continuing on, when one got to the left flank to get reinforcements for the right line they were attacked by a large force about the same size as the one that got the right flank, the battle lasted about half an hour, hehe they made them retreat, at that time the officer in charge sent two people to follow them and set a ambush that will um to put it in a technical terms a. kick there asses, that survivor I was talking about earlier on? Thats where he comes in and another one as well, they planed to split into to sniping groups, one on the left horizon and one on the right, when they where in position, they opened fire, at this point they gave us the first major advantage in the war, this confused the enemy considerably and had the main assault group boxed in till the main gun was charged. So you to come up here, these six people here deserve all of these new armour and weapons and all of you six are getting promoted to SSF, give em a cheer everyone, (every one cheers and so) all people dismissed.
Right flank survivor1. So youre the ones that survived the first wav? I here your quite a sniper. Right flank survivor2. Yea heard you shot one that shot another and another. Alka. I did? Right flank survivor1. Yea he did, the guy that he shot had my friend pined down. Revuon. I did see a whole lot of the enemy fall right in front of me ha-ha. Alka. So what are your names? Right flank survivor2. Malcout and shes Valare. Valare. So what do we do now? Surjov. We could have a look at the big hole? Could be fun? Revuon. Yea lets go, you two coming? Malcout. Mys well, wev got nothing to do since were off duty.
Alka. then its settled then, lets go to the big hole. (They start walking to the hole. (5 min later) Falin. Man, look at the size of it! And how deep it goes! Revuon. I dont think I can see the bottom? Valare. Look at that group, their going to through a torch down it. Alka. Their it goes. Surjov. It ant stopping Malcout. Gone I dont think well find out how deep it goes by chucking a torch down it. Valare. Then what do you suggest? Malcout. Wireless camera. Valare. Where can we get one? Malout. Got one right here, military issue, it has a two mile radius. Falin. II think somethings down there Surjov. Why do you say that? Falin. Listen!
Alka. Err. I think I can here something mechanical or metal? Valare. Yea I think I hear it to Malcout. Well soon find out! (Just about to drop the camera down the hole) Valare. No! Wait! How are we going to watch it? Malcout. With this, its the receiver; tell that group to come here if they want to see whats down there. Valare. Hey! Guys! Do you want to see something cool? (The group) Yea!!!! Valare then come here! (The group) Watcha gonna do? Alka. Where about to find out whats down there.
Malcout. Here we go (They chuck the camera down the hole; it took 1 minute to reach the bottom) Surjov. It looks like its about to hit the bottom! Revoun. What the hell is that! (The group) it looks like a city, yea, or a base? Alka. Somthing is coming on screen. (Some mechanical mech thing) Valare. My god! Falin. Itits huge! Surjov. Forget about its size! Look at its weapons! Malcout. I think we found something! Alka. Its looooking right at us! Malcout. Fuck! It shot the camera! Valare. Somethings coming up and fast!
Revoun. Its a missile! Run! (After a few seconds of running the missile broke surface then exploded in mid air then started to suck in air and then a massive light and than BOOM a massive shockwave that almost knocked the crashed ship over. Alka. Arrrg my ears. Is everybody ok?! Surjov. Fuck! I cant hear a thing! Falin. My eyes! My eyes! Revuon. You ok? Falin. I cant see the light! Malcout. What the fuck just happened?! Valare. Look at the ship! Its almost tipped over! Revoun. What about the others?
Alka. I dont think they made it we should get back As they were heading back, the sound of sirens and screams were getting louder. At this point they realised the amount of damage was caused. Valare. My god Revuon. Oh no Falin. Whats going on! Malcout. The the ships tipping over!!! Alka. Weve gota get over their now! Surjov. What a we gonna do? Alka. We have to stop the ship from tipping until they have got all the solders out from the other side! Valare. What do you have in plan? Alka. Same way as before, we do the same way as aligning it but with more cables, if where lucky enough, we might be able to stop it from falling! Come on lets go!
As they get closer to the main line the ship starts to creak randomly. Defence Capt. What the hell happened over there?! Surjov. Well we dropped a camera down the hole we saw a mech thing than dived for cover from that missile do you want to know more?!!! Defence Capt. What the?... mech thing? Well talk about that later but well have to deal with the ship first! We have to stop it from falling! There are people behind it! And we need to buy the rescue team some time to dig out the buried solders that got covered in snow when the shockwave hit! Man I dont know what to do?...
Alka. iv got an idea, its a long shot, but its the only thing I can see to the situation given. Defence Capt. Then what is it? Alka. The same way as aligning but with more cables, Defence Capt. Were are we going to get the cables? Revuon. What about the boarding cords? Defence Capt. Great! That should work just fine! Valare. I think falin should see a medic, hes suffering from temporary blindness, but his eyes are bleeding, Falin. Bleeding? Ohno will I be able to see again? Valare. I think so but it might be good to get them checked out.
Defence Capt. Agreed, can you take him? Valare. Fine, where are the medics located? Defence Capt. The closes one is somewhere near the right flank, thats where their attending the wounds to the solders down that side. Valare. Ok, well meet up with you soon. Defence Capt. So how about were gonna go about the cable alignment? Revuon. The boarding cords use a gun to propel it to the other ship than pull it in close so we can board it, but what im saying is we just do the same thing but the ground as our target.
Alka. Yeah and when its high enough, well use the standard cables to reinforce it and to be the back up if the cords snap! Revuon. And if the cords snap and the back ups hold well have time to change the boarding cords then start the pulley system again! Defence Capt. Great! Well get right on it! By the sound of that ship, I dont think itll stand much longer, but I need someone to lead each group, Revuon. I cant lead both of them; I was originally assigned to that specific area when I was on the ship, Malcout. Aww fuck! That mech thing is coming out of that hole!...
Defence Capt. Man thats big Where continuing the operation! You, go round up our forces and form the front line! Surjov. On it ser! Defence Capt. Any ideas on how to destroy that thing? Alka. Were gonna need some heavy weaponry, is the main gun still working? Defence Capt. Im afraid not, it got damaged in the shockwave. Alka. We need something heavy, got it! Lusteric mortar cannons! The hand held type! Defence Capt. Good, go get a squad and bring as many crates of that gun to this location! I dont think we have much time before it starts its attack! As the gigantic mech thing was getting closer,
Alka got sent to retrieve the heavy weaponry, so he rounded up a bunch of solders and led them to the outside armoury(the ship is sort of inaccessible right now) Alka. Okay guys, grab as many mortar guns grenades and anything that goes boom as you can carry! Were going to slay some robo ass! The sythin group starts cheering! When the crates arrived, that huge mech thing is about to commence its attack. Alka. We got the guns, about 50 or so. Defence Capt. Thats good enough, should be sufficient.
Surjov. (Comes running with a puffed voice) The line is formed ser! Defence Capt. Excellent solder! Take one of these, where going to punch a hole in that thing! Alka tell that squad to spread those weapons! Alka. Ser, where going to need a crate so I can arm a squad and try flank it ser! Surjov. Flank it! Oh not going near that thing! Its Fucken huge! Defence Capt. Him flanking it yes but were going to need to attack it from both sides, attacking it from one side is just not going to work, but maybe both sides, attack from left and right while it gets attacked from the main line as well guess what Surjov, thats your name right? Well youre going to lead the second squad, the one thats going to attack on the right side while Alka attacks the left.
Surjov. Youre all fucken insane! Defence Capt. Go and both form a squad and get into a good position on the left and right flank and wait for the order to attack, got it? Malcout. Ser, I think its going to attack! Defence Capt. Let me have a look (Boom! It starts to launch a massive flurry of energy based attacks with a few heavy ballistic attacks as well) Holy mother of mercy! That was frickin close! Go! We gonna need to stop it very soon! Cuz I dont think its going to stop! Alka. I think wed better go now
Surjov. I still cant believe im doing this As they gather troops for the mission, Alka saw some small light above the hill thats quite a distance away. Alka. What the? Surjov. Im in position, man you owe me big time Alka. Did you see the light on top of the hill close to that hole? Surjov. No? Wasnt looking. Alka. Never mind But just keep an eye on it just in case Surjov. Yea could be those barsteds. Alka. Any way, in position. Surjov. Man that thing is kicking our asses Alka. Get ready for the order.
Surjov. Roger that, but why is the main line not using the mortar cannons? Alka. Probably going to be a surprise attack when we charge in from both sides. Surjov. It looks like the ship alignment is going good. Alka. Revuon was always good with technical stuff, but man, if you piss him off! Surjov. Yea I heard, ha ha! (When he held the main line) What the hell? Alka. What? Surjov. You know that spot you told me to keep an eye on? Look. Alka. Damit. There attacking again but lets let them meet our new friend, lets just wait. (The aldorens charge down the hill towards the mech thing and attack it as if theyre suppressing it)
Surjov. Err thats not right? I think somethings a bit off dont you think so? Alka. Yeah, ill talk to our Capt, out, (He calls the Defence Capt) hey! Are you seeing this? Doesnt it seem a bit odd? Defence Capt. Yeah, it looks like there running or just there most sloppy attack yet? Alka. I think where about to find out (From the distance, the small flickers of light slowly began to get bigger with the sounds of guns in the background) Surjov. Alka! Alka! Can you hear me! Look at the hole! Alka. Oww shit (Background voices) aww no! Another one! / Where fucked/what will happen to us now? / lock an load boys! / Today is not a good day to die! /come on! Not even one day for a break! / Thats it im officially gone insane)
Alka. Another mech thing (Gigantic robo walking gun platform, AKA Mech thing) Well this changes a few things Capt. any ideas? Defence Capt. Nothing lets just watch a bit longer (As they watch, about two minutes in, a bunch of aldorens comes fleeing over the hill and what looks like a small squad of blood soaked mechs chasing them) Alka. I think there falling back here? Think we should help? Surjov. WHAT! How can you say that! Their frickin murderers! Alka. Arent we the same? Didnt we shoot them out of space first?
Surjov. They were lining up for attack formation! We had to in order to defend ourselves! Alka. But we did inflict the same amount of casualtys didnt we? Defence Capt. Stop youre jabbering you two! Youre clogging the radio! Any way, where going to assist them, we have no choice in the mater if we want to live though the night. Alka. Hes got a point, we both want to live but thats not possible if we do it alone, its time to put the matters behind us and take on this new threat. Surjov. Fine Defence Capt. Ok now those matters are behind us, iv got a new plan, its simple and the only one iv got right now, im going to send the two of you into the fight first, fight by their sides for awhile so they get the message where not going to kill them, then well send all of our forces straight into the battle and try and hold the ravine intll morning,
Alka. What about the ship alignment? Defence Capt. Dont worry about that. Revuons got it under control so go! (Both teams say something to boost morale) Alkas speech. Ok men, where about to enter a battle on a scale too large to even imagine, the true enemy were facing is unknown and where about to join forces with our opposition to take on this new threat, the fight is expected to go on intll morning, but where defiantly going to give then one hell of a fight! As soon as we get into the battle our main line will charge and join the battle! It is expected that there will be a lot of things that well have to deal with along the way, but we can take on any thing that they can throw at us! Come on; lets show them what were made of! Charge!
Surjovs speech. Now where were we? Oh yea! Solders hear me out! Our time has come for us to prove our might! In this great battle ahead! We are going to charge in and support our once mortal enemy to face some rust buckets sounds simple huh? Well itll be a tough fight indeed, but where sythins! We! Kick! Ass! And lets shock our new allies what where capable of! Those mechs must fall! Move out! At the same time, both forces charge straight at the great battle, the time of arrival is expected to be two minutes, (One minute to go)
Malcout. (On the coms) Hey you to! Its me! Malcout! I thought I might let you too know that we have some special editions for the main attack! Alka. What is it? Malcout. You have to see for your selfs, But I can say that it looks like the techs have been busy over the months. Surjov. Come on man, tell us! Please! Malcout. Ha ha! You too are just going to have to wait and see! Gota go, got to organise the main line for the attack, Out. (But enough of that, lets go back to the start of the story and hear the aldorens side)
That's my latest update on this story.
i thank all the people who had the guts and time to read
all of this, thank you.
if you see somthing i could improve on please let me
know. i want all of my game to be perfect in every way.
and to let you people know again, this is some of the
history of the game witch the main story will be built on.
I still have numerous factions and side story's to type.
but one thing at a time is the best way to go about thngs
i say!
so i say again. thank you for reading this large post
and one more thing. if you have some good names for
characters, female/male post them hear if you like.
its the only great hardship im encountering ATM thanks.
if anyone has a name or two for the aldoren side, my next goal. plz list as im pretty bad at thinking of names thx 
