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OK so I`m inspired by Scorpions BIO so I thought I would try one out.I`m no writer..thats for sure..expect all sorts of spelling and grammer mistakes. Cardamine, Cardamine, everybody wants Cardamine -=ChapterOne=-parents My story begins in New London, I grew up on Planet NewLondon and I never wanted to be a pilot or even go into space at all. My motherand father were killed when their transport ship was attacked in the Cambridgesystem. It was said that Corsairs were responsible for this but it …

Thanks, Hey Mike..The "Crackled voice...maybe its because the intercom is not working at its best at that point.You should thank me..I didnt put in this part... [ The CFPD officer was alot different than I had imagined from the voice..stood before me was a small pasty looking fat man with a ginger afro and buck teeth. ] If anyone looks like this..I seriously apologize...do post a pic KIDDING! But seriously.. I would like to incorperate some of you into my story, if you would like to be included…

Yea I get ya..sort of intertwine the stories. Well....I might start on another chapter later tonight..I have been rolling some plot points round my head all day. My story has to follow a certain arc because I have an ending thought out...Im really just filling out the middle and fleshing characters out. What would be cool is..I can drop your characters in and out of my story as they become necessary to the plot, I can also allude to events that happen in your (Scorpions) Bio story and even set …

Yea I will add some events in the next chapter I added Chapter 2. TEzZ

(Quote from Michael)Thanks Dude, looks better. I will try to keep the format the same for the next chapters as well.