Search Results

Nice 1 Scorp...Its a good read, very inventive. Can I offer a little bit of help with your grammer.For instance, the use of the word mine. It is perfectly understandable but the usage is wrong. Here are examples.. This is "my" motherI am eating "my" dinner. That hat is "mine"All of those apples are "mine" You seem to be confusing the words. With the greatest of respect of course. I cannot write even write one sentence in any foreign language lol TEzZ