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This ongoing tale will bounce between screenplay and narrative format. (Nameless host walks out)Host: Some of you may know about Cantana Focks, the son and rightful heir of a deceased business Mogul and second in command of The Republic Alliance, a notorious smuggler organization led by the mysterious Revan. However not many people know the lengths in which he goes to keep is identity anonymous. Money and power attracts friends and people you think are friends of course and a surprisingly small…

(Planet Denver - Greeley Sector 43.22,7.22) Cantana: C'mon man you just got to release my ship!Customs Official: Sorry boss, I already told you. Anything bigger than an armored transport must go through a mandatory secondary screening as well as a safety inspectionCantana: Don't you know WHO I AM?!Officer: *blank stare*Cantana: Seriously?! I go through here a hundred times a week! I must get to Planet Los Angeles. It's....a family emergency...Officer: *blank state*Cantana: *deep sigh* how long …

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(Setting - Liberty Public Records Office, Planet Denver) Concierge: Im sorry, Mr. Rigel, that's all we have. Rigel Focks only had one son and nobody knows who he is or what he looks like. He was presumed to have died while incarcerated in a Coalition prison. I heard it was a stabbingJack Rigel/Cantana Focks: I see. Do you have any information on Aileen FocksConcierge: *getting hostile* Why would you need to know about her?Cantana: Well, ya see it's like this: im doing an essay for my journalism…

(Planet Denver, Greeley Spaceport bar) Cantana sat at the bar counter drinking a very watered down stein of Liberty Ale. He always wondered why Denver alcohol was watered down. The closest explanation he could think of is that Planet Denver inhabitant got too rowdy after a sports event or more likely, some politician got paid to pass such a law. there was less than 20 minutes until he had to be at the Dockmaster's office to sign off on the final paperwork so that the Reaper can "lawfully operat…

(Space - Dublin Jump Gate Queue 3, New London) A faint ping came from Cantana's short message system notifying him that the Reaper has now entered the queue for the Dublin System and his presence was requested on the bridge. He acknowledged the ping and began to get his bearings as watered down alcohol has always had some adverse effects on him. The subsequent hangovers and irritability from drinking is the reason why Cantana sticks to Space Grass over booze, but he bored the other day on Plane…

Work in progress/ongoing story. Actually its until I get a new laptop and recover my FLIDs from my old laptop. Then I can resolve this story and reopen the Galaxy News Service studio

(Interview Room - Battleship Hood - Dublin) "2 hours" Cantana thought to himself. He was trying to gauge how long he had been sitting alone in the small, 8 by 10 room somewhere in the belly of the old Bretonian warship. Cantana had just been arrested by an unknown group of people and while he didn't show it, he was just a little terrified. The soldiers confiscated his datapad and sidearm and Cantana was beginning to go through withdrawl from the lack of connection to Neural net. It wasn't like …

(Interview Room - Battleship Hood - Dublin System) Cantana was taken by surprise by Jun'ko Zane's request. He wondered what the Order would want with his boss? "Have you ever heard of The Force, Mr. Focks?" Zane inquired"No what is it? Some heavily armed subsidiary of The Order?""It's a Living energy field that connects all life in the galaxy." She answered, "It's possible to access and once it is, it gives that person impossible powers like Jumping over 30 feet in the air, moving objects up to…

(Captains Cabin - The Reaper - Omega 41, near Leon Base) Cantana placed his datapad on the nightstand next to his bed. He just got done messaging his old cellmate Ajay who was released from the Coalition prison they both resided a few weeks ago. Ajay was incarcerated for impersonating a Coalition navy officer, Stealing a Lagg from a military base and sneaking back into Sirius through the Lower unknown system into Omicron Gamma where a then small-time mercenary named Lord Rayden managed to disab…

(StarForge Observation Deck - Omicron Gamma) For Some reason, Cantana felt this whole thing was turning into a disaster. There was a little less than a week until the space race and he had not heard confirmation of his entry into the race. Commander Zane had assured this as well as a fixed race, even though he wasn't exactly sure what this meant. On top of that, He hadn't received his J-40 Quicksilver. Ajay assured he'd have it ready with all the modifications before race but Cantana still need…

(Flight Deck - [Restricted space] - Omicron Gamma) A ping had woken Cantana up from his nap. He stretched as he grabbed his datapad and read the ping. It said that the Leviathan had entered Omicron Gamma, and was about an hour away from the Starforge so Cantana got ready. He arrived on the flight deck to find what seemed like every person on the station was there scrambling to get the station ready for Revans arrival. Cantana remembered that he hadn't told anyone about her return and now it mad…

It was at the moment when Cantana realized that he had everything he ever wanted. In that same moment, He saw it all come crashing down Cantana indeed meet the individual known as Aileen Focks. However it was not his sister. In fact, It was his Mother! His biological mother that is. The women whom Cantana thought was his mom was actually the mistress of the late Rigel Focks. Officially, Diane Focks-McRay was killed in a drunk flying accident. Both ships collided above Planet Los Angeles and act…

It was two weeks since the aliens left the edgeword systems. Thanks to valiant efforts of the Rheinland Military and The Order, The aliens were repelled back into the reaches of unknown space. Roughly 100 Million people were killed by the time the war was turned in favor of humans. They reached the Stuttgart system before their mothership was destroyed as a result of a concentrated effort of Rheinland Military, Corsairs and a few Dark Phoenix mercenaries. After that battle, within 1 month the a…

"You want me to do WHAT?" Exclaimed Cantana"We want you to create a Galaxy-wide discussion over the ineffectiveness of current law enforcement practices." Recited Jun'ko Zane, Commander with Section 0 of The Order. Section 0 is a famous legend within the many circles of conspiracy theorists for being the ones behind many of the various terrorist attack committed by any and all factions. These attacks generally cause discussions at local government levels that provide pathways for changes in law…

It has been a couple weeks since The Order forced Cantana Focks and the Republic Alliance to perform acts of piracy in Sirius systems. Cantana feels that life is more dangerous since he became a space pirate. Not just because local law enforcement wanted him dead but the economic and political ramifications against Focks Industries should Sirius governments act on it. True to their word, The Order managed to keep the lawyers and investigators at bay. It was clear that the only organization who …

Cantana wasn't sure how to handle this. He's got an undercover detective from The Steel Hearts working as a freelance gun runner right under his nose. He was trying to convince himself that killing cops wasn't the answer, but still found himself shooting Tribbs in the head. Even if he "fired" Tribbs, He becomes a liability and Focks would be forced to take him out anyway even if he doesn't get his hands dirty. The Silver Tongued Devil was thinking about corruption and suddenly had an epiphany: …

Before i post Part 2, what do you guys think?

(Quote from Huor) So it's settled then. Youre volunteering to do the artwork then. I expect preliminary storyboards on my desk by monday *Edit* i'm only joking, Huor. I do need to work on writing out setting at least. I've seen a lot of shows on TV that have 2 or 3 episodes in a row that are kind of slow. However it's still crucial to pay attention to as there could be important details that will make later acts make more sense. A focus on Character development as much as story.

Cantana Stared out the window of the shuttle as he descended through Planet Crete's atmosphere. The warm colors of red and orange were cast on the thunderhead clouds forming in the distance as the sun was setting in the West. There were two other people in the shuttle besides the pilot, Both Republic armed guards providing escort to The Silver Tongued Devil. They sat like statues, stoic and serious, alert to any threat that may arise. Republic Alliance's Crete safehouse coming up in the distanc…