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good one, edgar all... er... baldy here's one of mine... it's alright, i wrote a few years ago though... Always, Never Leaving In captivity, always, never leaving,Lost my way, cant get back,Look at my wounded life,Never had a friend,In envy, always, never leaving. In my own prison, alone,Hold my breath, let me go,Let me leave this place,Find a friend, find a life,In shadows, always, never leaving. Let me not be unguided,Show me the way,Show me the friend I never had,Give me the sound of life,In…

that's awesome, dude! that last line has too many syllables, lmao it's great,though, but if you can cut it down a bit, it could sound better then again, poetry isn't about sounding well, it's about what you feel and that's about as deep as you'll ever hear me : ) this one I wrote in third grade : ) Hello, my name is stinky, and my favorite color is pinky,I don't have any more to write, So go away before i bite haha, i was so lame.... fallen, you wouldn't remember that one, would you? oh, and my…